My take on an alternate Parasoul ending

[Tenterment]

I am currently making an alternate universe ending to Parasoul's storyline, just for fun. I figured I could post it here for people to see if they wanted.

This is only chapter 1 of either 4 or 5. I haven't decided how long it will end up being, but I have the storyline laid out.

I have never made a story this long before, so I'm sure there will be issues, so feel free to give feedback and share your thoughts! :)

https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=19162923

(Also if this is not where I should post this let me know so that I may correct it.)

 

[Fikia]

I like it! I'm looking forward to more of it!